midnightRUN

122: Chapter 6, page 11

"rude", Elliot? You SHOT someone.

also when it comes to things like characters getting hurt... it's difficult for me to write and layout I suppose, it's not something i do often (you wouldn't guess from later chapters but hey). i think i'm still awkward with writing conflict scenes like this but I hope to improve.

Kelly

also does la trobe even have fashion stores nearby??? i can't remember any i think i got my streets mucked up when I wrote this. oh well. i guess that further grounds this into the 'fiction' category...